I know you left me standing there...

Characters staying in an English hotel are suddenly trapped there, subject to both its mysteries and the whims of its unusual staff. Sci-fi/horror/mystery. Random weirdness is essential.

I know you left me standing there...

Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:25 pm

After the lights had turned back on and had left Nailah standing there, confused about what just happened she takes her book and makes her way down to the lounge.
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:30 pm

Steve is there, reading a superhero comic featuring a glowing sword on the cover.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:36 pm

She gives him a weary smile and sits down on one of the couches, putting the book down on the table and lighting up a cigarette.
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Postby Narrator » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:49 pm

Nailah hears the sound of something dripping as a faint metallic odor, masked by the smoke of her cigarette, fills the air.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:52 pm

She glances around, then looks at her cigarette suspiciously, trying to shake the odd feeling creeping up on her.

"You were right, this place is strange. Very strange."
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:54 pm

Steve doesn't answer.
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Postby Narrator » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:58 pm

There is only the dripping of something red from the comic book. Its cover is soaked with it.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:01 pm

"Mister Jones...?" she says carefully, trying to look around the comic and at his face, telling herself that he just must have spilled something on the cover. Cranberry juice or something.
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Postby Narrator » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:08 pm

The comic book somehow manages to obscure the boy's face at every angle. Under the red, the cover is no longer that of a superhero tale. It is a man's face peering hungrily through a window. The title is the same as the very book she had just mysteriously recovered.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:17 pm

"How is that..." she takes the book to double-check, though she knows the title is the same. The book cover she remembers as much less unsettling though, showing just an empty window.
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Postby Narrator » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:21 pm

The empty window suddenly isn't so empty as a shadow moves towards the glass with lightning speed.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:25 pm

She lets out a sharp scream and drops the book as if it bit her, pressing herself backwards into the couch.
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Postby Narrator » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:28 pm

Both Steve and the reddened comic are now gone, as if never there. The smell is also gone.
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:32 pm

From a different direction, the boy hurried into the lounge and towards Nailah.

"I heard a scream, are you okay?"
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:34 pm

"I... what?" her head swivels around to Steve, then back to who was sitting across from her and back to Steve. Meanwhile she has pulled her legs up onto the couch, away from the book.
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 4:57 pm

He looked to the empty furniture across from Nailah, then to the book, then to to her.

"You... saw something... didn't you?"
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:00 pm

"How... but... you..."

Now that whatever it was seems to be gone she slowly comes to her senses again.

"You were sitting there, reading a comic-book. At least... I thought it was you..." she adds, realizing she never actually saw NotSteve's face.
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:06 pm

"And it was just sitting there?" he asked. A strange choice of words.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:11 pm

"Yeah, he just disappeared into thin.... Why did you say 'it'?"
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:19 pm

"You wouldn't believe me..."
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:22 pm

"I just watched someone disappear into thin air!" And was attacked by my book. I think. "I'll gladly listen to anything that means I'm not hallucinating."
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:35 pm

"Okay..." he said, breathing out, "The air... it smelled funny but is normal now and the lights wigged out, right?"
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:37 pm

"Well there was this weird smell and I thought I heard something..."
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:47 pm

"The smell shows up just before the nightmares. Only... they aren't nightmares. And there are these... things... in the dark... usually just out of sight. That me that wasn't me must have been one."
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:50 pm

"Right. A nightmare. I barely got any sleep last night and I dozed off for a moment." she says, ignoring the fact that NotSteve had been sitting there when she walked in.
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:04 pm

"That's not it. These come when you're awake," he said with an odd air of authority.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:09 pm

"So they're hallucinations?" she asks, sitting properly again, then leaning down to pick up her book, looking at Steve as she does as not to be impolite. As she picks up the book something falls out between the pages and onto the carpet without her noticing.
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:13 pm

"Not... exactly," he began, but paused as he looked at what fell out of the book.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:15 pm

"You're telling me that actually happened? Someone was sitting there and then just disappeared?"
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:27 pm

He shook his head. "Not someone."

He stepped closer to the object that fell. "You dropped this," he said as he picked it up.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:30 pm

She looks at the strange key he picked up and shakes her head. "That's not mine."
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:41 pm

What a weird key...

"It was in your book though."
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:44 pm

"Whoever brought the book back must have put it in there..."
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:52 pm

"I wonder what it opens," he wondered.

Something creepy, duh.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:56 pm

"Maybe it's a staff key?"
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:05 pm

"Yeah maybe," he said, turning it over in his hand.
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:25 pm

"Well there's two ways to find out. And there aren't that many people here who could have left it for me, right?"
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:28 pm

"What way besides handing it to someone on the staff which I sooooo don't want to do?"
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Postby Nailah Weaver » Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:29 pm

"Trying it on doors."
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Postby Steve Jones » Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:34 pm

He smacked his head. "Duh."
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