Secrets no one ever should keep

Characters staying in an English hotel are suddenly trapped there, subject to both its mysteries and the whims of its unusual staff. Sci-fi/horror/mystery. Random weirdness is essential.

Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:17 pm

Steve woke up in the middle of the night, disoriented on the floor.

Wh-where...

This was not his room. Panic began to rise before he remembered. He was in Miss Weaver's room. His own was... too dangerous. He felt a pressure in his bladder, and so got up and went to the small bathroom to relieve himself.

Afterwards, he washed his hands in the sink and paused to examine his reflection.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:23 pm

Did something move behind him in the mirror? No, just a shadow. And tired eyes. And nothing lurking behind the shower curtains either because keeping them close had just made Nailah paranoid every time she had come in here. So really, all that's looking back at Steve is his reflection.

But did something just creak in the room? Probably just Nailah shifting in her sleep.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:29 pm

Steve jumped slightly but shook off the feeling. Not everything here meant danger, right? But he still exited the bathroom cautiously.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:45 pm

The first thing he'd see would be Nailah sitting on the edge of the bed, inside the rectangle of light shining from the bathroom, blankly staring through Steve.

The second probably the fact that her head is missing from slightly above the eyebrows upwards.

The third thing is not really something he sees directly. More a sudden movement as something suddenly jerks away and seems to withdraw into the shadow Nailah is casting onto the bed. It wouldn't even be noticeable but there's a slithering movement and a faint sizzling sound coming from the restless shadow.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 4:54 pm

Steve froze.

Oh God...

What had they done to her? And what had just moved?
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 4:58 pm

Whatever it was was still moving, try to slide up and arm (or some kind of appendage) behind Nailah and reach for the back of her neck, careful to stay out of the light.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:02 pm

He reached out nervously and felt around for the wall switch for the room. There was one near the tiny entrance hall... right?
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:05 pm

There was. And with a flick of it the room filled with light and the living shadow that had been hiding in Nailah's disappears into thin air with nowhere to slip away to.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:09 pm

He slowly moved closer.

"...Miss Weaver?" he asked nervously. He knew she wouldn't answer.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:11 pm

And she didn't. Though he'd notice that he could look into her head. It's not empty but there's not exactly a brain there either. Books and figures and switches and all kinds of things that really shouldn't have enough room to be in there.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:21 pm

"... the hell?" he muttered as he looked.

Did that thing... open her?

The thought lead him to look where it had been.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:25 pm

Nothing. Well, no sign of the thing anyway. But what is there is the thin metal rod sticking out of Nailah's neck, ending in a bow that looks like the cross-section of a head.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:32 pm

"Another key?" he blinked.

Do I... well I can't leave her like... this.

He carefully turned the key.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:34 pm

Her head closes (and even if he looked he couldn't quite say how) and the key pops out of her neck. The key-hole remains though and she doesn't seem to wake up.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:43 pm

He frowned and moved back around front.

"Miss Weaver?" he asked before snapping a finger.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:48 pm

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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:52 pm

"Please... please wake up..." he pleaded, beginning to panic.

He choked the fear down checked out the hole again. Maybe he missed something.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:54 pm

Still a keyhole. In a place where one really shouldn't be, but there it is.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:00 pm

A horrible thought occurred to him. What if it... took something, some integral part of her?

He looked on the bed hopefully. It left the key after all.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:22 pm

There was. It's a ring. Or it would be if it had a little more detail. Like this it almost looks more like a crude drawing of one.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:29 pm

He blinked at the ring,

This is such a bad idea, but what else is there to try?

He slid the key back in and turned it.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:42 pm

Her head opens up, revealing the same view as earlier. Taking a closer look he'd notice a couple blank areas with only frayed remains or crude sketches filling in for what should be there. There's a stick figure that somehow still manages to look imposing, a church that looks like it was drawn by a 4 year-old, then a couple more recent things like the hotel that is taking up a sizeable chunk on one side. Next to it a figure with curly red hair is scrawled on the wall. She's holding a hammer and where her hands would be has been scribbled over with red crayon. In front of it a much more realistic looking version of Miss McManus is standing, frowning at the drawing. And so it goes on. Most of it seems rather quiet, but in one corner a small effigy of Nailah is sitting in front of an open book, half of one page filled, the rest empty.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 7:42 pm

For some crazy reason, he squinted to attempt to read the tiny book.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 7:47 pm

...ZzzzZzZzzZZZzZzzZZzzzhurh? Wha-what is that? Hey! What are you... Oh my god, my head is... wait how am I looking into my own head? Hey, what the hell are you!? What are you doing!?
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 7:53 pm

Wish I could unstrike that...

He considered where to put the ring.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 7:57 pm

Anywhere he'd try to put it would be room. There doesn't seem to be a strict filing system at work here.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:07 pm

He prayed and picked up the ring as if it were cracked glass, half-expecting to see her memories when he touched it.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:17 pm

Nothing. It was just a ring. Well it felt a little rough, but that's because it not quite done somehow.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:20 pm

He carefully and curiously looked for an inscription.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:23 pm

There's something, but it's all scratched and rubbed away.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:27 pm

As carefully as a kid playing Operation, he slowly put the ring back where he assumed it belonged and jerked his hand back out.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Narrator » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:29 pm

It seemed to settle in just fine. Meanwhile the little ScribeNailah seems to have found her quill and walks back towards the open book.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:45 pm

He prayed he was right, and took one last look at the... the somehow imposing stick figure caught his eye. He shivered and without realizing it, had reached out to touch it.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Nailah Weaver » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:50 pm

The little ScribeNailah reached the book and sat down again.


"Wh-what the hell are you d-doing!?" Nailah suddenly snapped back to life, staring into her own head from next to Steve.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:58 pm

He jerked back, startled.

"OhthankGodIcamebackfromthebathroomand..." He breathed out. "Some thing had... opened you. I had to fix you..."
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Nailah Weaver » Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:02 pm

"What? Fix me? You... you're poking around inside my head!? How is that even possible!" she scrambles away from Steve on the bed, head still gapingly open.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:07 pm

"You weren't moving! I had to do something!" he responded pleadingly. "And there's a key in your neck... turn it and you'll... you'll be okay."
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Nailah Weaver » Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:15 pm

"What!?" She grasps around the back of her neck until her fingers find the key. Fumbling around she manages to lock her head again and pull it out. She holds it like you'd hold a dead rat or something equally disgusting, looking at it. "How..."
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Steve Jones » Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:18 pm

"I don't know..." he said. Then his eyes widened as he realized something.
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Re: Secrets no one ever should keep

Postby Nailah Weaver » Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:19 pm

"What now?" she asks, almost not wanting to.
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